Further tidy on Android instructions README.md (#7077)

* Further tidy on Android instructions README.md

Fixed some logic when following readme direction

* Clean up redundent information

A new user arriving will see simple directions on llama.cpp homepage

* corrected puncuation

Period after cmake, colon after termux

* re-word for clarity

method seems to be more correct, instead of alternative in this context

* Organized required packages per build type

building llama.cpp with NDK on a pc doesn't require installing clang, cmake, git, or wget in termux.

* README.md

corrected title

* fix trailing whitespace

README.md

@@ -936,17 +936,25 @@ If your issue is with model generation quality, then please at least scan the fo
 
 ### Android
 
+#### Build on Android using Termux
+[Termux](https://github.com/termux/termux-app#installation) is a method to execute `llama.cpp` on an Android device (no root required).
+```
+apt update && apt upgrade -y
+apt install git make cmake
+```
+
+It's recommended to move your model inside the `~/` directory for best performance:
+```
+cd storage/downloads
+mv model.gguf ~/
+```
+
+[Get the code](https://github.com/ggerganov/llama.cpp#get-the-code) & [follow the Linux build instructions](https://github.com/ggerganov/llama.cpp#build) to build `llama.cpp`.
+
 #### Building the Project using Android NDK
-You can easily run `llama.cpp` on Android device with [termux](https://termux.dev/).
+Obtain the [Android NDK](https://developer.android.com/ndk) and then build with CMake.
-
-First, install the essential packages for termux:
-```
-pkg install clang wget git cmake
-```
-Second, obtain the [Android NDK](https://developer.android.com/ndk) and then build with CMake:
-
-You can execute the following commands on your computer to avoid downloading the NDK to your mobile. Of course, you can also do this in Termux.
 
+Execute the following commands on your computer to avoid downloading the NDK to your mobile. Alternatively, you can also do this in Termux:
 ```
 $ mkdir build-android
 $ cd build-android
@@ -954,7 +962,9 @@ $ export NDK=<your_ndk_directory>
 $ cmake -DCMAKE_TOOLCHAIN_FILE=$NDK/build/cmake/android.toolchain.cmake -DANDROID_ABI=arm64-v8a -DANDROID_PLATFORM=android-23 -DCMAKE_C_FLAGS=-march=armv8.4a+dotprod ..
 $ make
 ```
-Install [termux](https://termux.dev/) on your device and run `termux-setup-storage` to get access to your SD card.
+
+Install [termux](https://github.com/termux/termux-app#installation) on your device and run `termux-setup-storage` to get access to your SD card (if Android 11+ then run the command twice).
+
 Finally, copy these built `llama` binaries and the model file to your device storage. Because the file permissions in the Android sdcard cannot be changed, you can copy the executable files to the `/data/data/com.termux/files/home/bin` path, and then execute the following commands in Termux to add executable permission:
 
 (Assumed that you have pushed the built executable files to the /sdcard/llama.cpp/bin path using `adb push`)
@@ -976,25 +986,10 @@ $cd /data/data/com.termux/files/home/bin
 $./main -m ../model/llama-2-7b-chat.Q4_K_M.gguf -n 128 -cml
 ```
 
-Here is a demo of an interactive session running on Pixel 5 phone:
+Here's a demo of an interactive session running on Pixel 5 phone:
 
 https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/271616/225014776-1d567049-ad71-4ef2-b050-55b0b3b9274c.mp4
 
-#### Build on Android using Termux
-[Termux](https://github.com/termux/termux-app#installation) is an alternative to execute `llama.cpp` on an Android device (no root required).
-```
-apt update && apt upgrade -y
-apt install git
-```
-
-It's recommended to move your model inside the `~/` directory for best performance:
-```
-cd storage/downloads
-mv model.gguf ~/
-```
-
-[Follow the Linux build instructions](https://github.com/ggerganov/llama.cpp#build) to build `llama.cpp`.
-
 ### Docker
 
 #### Prerequisites